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Palutena, Goddess of Light

Discussion in 'Fiction' started by Black Steel, Dec 26, 2012.

  1. Black Steel

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  2. onlinehero

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    A bit too long, would be better if it was shorter. Also the level of gore, and totally indestructible and too super powered villain are so ridiculous that it makes this a bit frustrating to read. Too bad since I really liked the heroine and the setting in general.
     
  3. I'm afraid I'm going to have to disagree, for whatever that's worth. I quite liked the story, and I appreciated that it was a little bit longer. Thumbs up.
     
  4. Seth

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    If it's your first ryona story, then it's very good, imho.