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[Black Steel]

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[onlinehero]

A bit too long, would be better if it was shorter. Also the level of gore, and totally indestructible and too super powered villain are so ridiculous that it makes this a bit frustrating to read. Too bad since I really liked the heroine and the setting in general.

 

[BrooklynFates]

I'm afraid I'm going to have to disagree, for whatever that's worth. I quite liked the story, and I appreciated that it was a little bit longer. Thumbs up.

 

[Seth]

If it's your first ryona story, then it's very good, imho.