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Oz's Original stories and Rewrites

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by OzofMassage, Aug 19, 2015.

  1. OzofMassage

    OzofMassage Potential Patron

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    I have been a long time user of SDTmods and want to give back in some way. I am not good at all at coming up with a full story lines. To build myself up to building full story lines. I have am rewriting older dialogues that were my favorites. I am doing this to become more comfortable with coding and writing.

    My Stories.
    currently working on one.

    Rewrites
    Football Team Orgy
    Written by Rusty Schacleford
    http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=4773.msg70910#msg70910
    My goal is to diversify the dialogue and work on the mechanics on how characters switch. I feel like there is some great potential here for this story.

    GOALS
    -change intro
    -customize male characters
    -easier interface (buttons)
    -custom dialogue for each character
    -increase dialogue (probably using dialogue from other stories and will be credited)
    -figure out how to use breast enhancer mod for large belly to utilize throw up lines.(way down the road)
    -possible use of animtools (again, down the road if I feel comfortable using it)

    I will pause on the is project for a little while. I am writing my own dialogue to test the breastenlargment mod.
    Please enjoy this until I finish my other dialogue.

    v.3 (8/25/15)
    -placed buttons to increase and decrease her mood. No need to pull up and down.
    -rewrote the dialogue coding so now there are about 9 pieces per mood in the area's of post intro, general, and a couple others. The lines were there but I noticed that she speaking very much so I put the dialogue for those area's in steps they all get a turn.

    Older Version notes
    v.2
    -Used DialogueChecker to take care of many problems from before thanks to TMB.
    -Made it so the 8 characters will go in a sequence after one is finished.
    -Made each character custom (color, clothes and sizes).

    V.1
    Changed intro to test ability to do basic coding.

    Daughter's Friend V.0.9.1
    Written by: Kasamaz
    http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=3203.0
    I really enjoyed this story but found needing to change the settings in the dialogue go on different paths a little laborious. I am updating this so that there will be a button sets much like Wee Willies Slave bazaar and Slave Trainer.

    One major point I did change about this story line is that I have taken out the age differences in the story and replaced them with different characters. I will not change them back. Feel free to change the dialogue as you wish.

    Notes:
    -place folder into mods folder.
    -The dialogue takes a moment after choosing your daughters friend.
    -I know there are many dialogue errors and I plan on fixing them soon.(i am just excited about showing off what i have learned with button programming.
    -those background are what I hope to use later.

    V.1
    - first dialogue working fine and transfers well into next
    - able to move variables through dialogues.
    - changed age differences into different lady profiles.

    Goals
    - modify beginning dialogue so buttons work properly.
    - figure out how to load backgrounds (not working quite right)
    - fix all errors in main dialogue
    - edit lines to make dialogue more interesting (remove clothing at specific lines.
    - many others.



    Dialogue Checker question: Is there some way to hide lines that aren't being used but are kept for backup?

    Mods used:
    SDTDialogueactionsV4.01
    sby_loader_pack_5_545
    DialogueChecker
    http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=3820.0
     

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  2. aztlan

    aztlan Swell Supporter

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    Re: Football Team Orgy Rewrite

    Nice.

    It looks like you might also be using sby's superbelly.

    The pull up -pull down mechanism are finicky at best. If you are using SDTDialogueactionsV4.01 you should consider switching to buttons.

    Also, one logical place to expand this is with animtools and introduce additional positions.
     
  3. tmb

    tmb Vivacious Visitor

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    Re: Football Team Orgy Rewrite

    Hi, I have yet to test your dialogue ingame, but I already used DialogueChecker (v3.02, http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=3820.0 ) against it and corrected the 11 major and 11 minor issues the best I could.

     

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  4. OzofMassage

    OzofMassage Potential Patron

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    Re: Football Team Orgy Rewrite

    I do agree with you. But since I am new at coding I wanted to focus on changing a few things and getting those to work (growing confidence) before I begin working on buttons. Animetools is way out there for me in skill.

    Thank you very much for that. I have now since downloaded the DialogueChecker and will make sure to do that before posting again.
     
  5. OzofMassage

    OzofMassage Potential Patron

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    Re: Football Team Orgy Rewrite

    Uploaded V.3
     
  6. aztlan

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    Re: Football Team Orgy Rewrite

    Hey - a couple of more thoughts on how to enhance this:

    1. A nice background for the party with various other students in the background as onlookers might be good. (Is there such a background on the site? I'm not sure I've seen a good one for it but suspect there might be one.)

    2. Some comments from other girls at the party might be good - they could be commenting on things like what a whore/slut She is, how they would never do that or they can't believe she can take the whole things, etc.
     
  7. OzofMassage

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    Uploaded a revamping of Daughter's friend. There is much work to be done. let me know what you think.
     
  8. rob778

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    I haven't been able to get a single offer chain to fire in Daughter's friend, how do they work? Is there any way to set one to fire off quickly?
     
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    These mods require the Loader and WeeWillies's DialogueActions which can be found in the Loader Imports section.
     
  10. rob778

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    I was running it using the same loader setup from Fleack's thread but I'll try with the normal one later I guess.
     
  11. shurken

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    Oz! Cool stuff. Looking forward to anything else you get done.

    About Daughter's Friend, I had a bit of a problem, though I don't know if it's with my set-up or because the dialogue is still being worked on (and thus intentional and I broke it to play more), or if it's an actual bug. I had to remove the code -("Where":0,"Status":0,"Who":0,"Issue":0,"Reluc":0) from the initial setting line of the Daughter's friend.txt to get the choices made in the into to stay into the dialogue, otherwise it just loaded me in with the default settings (Hippie, out of town, happily marries, etc.).

    To answer Rob maybe, the offer lines only show up after you've cum 5 times or more. Try doing that first (using j as a cum shortcut if you're impatient).

    Suggestions and other stuff- I noticed a few problems when playing the dialogue, a few lines that showed up even if they shouldn't have been included (I remember the finish 5 line for the sleepover consistently happening no matter where the dialogue was set, I think one or two others, but I can't remember which now) but nothing serious or gamebreaking.

    I'd suggest doing something to keep her from repeating herself, so it doesn't run a chain of offers more than once. So if you at the end of a chain make her state as it comes to that chain a set value that either leads to one of her other chains or gives you one of a few lines relating to her personality there that are much more generic and could be repeated without being silly. That way if you get one of the offers she's already made triggered you're not stuck with those lines repeating for the next 10 lines.

    Also, I can not get the reluctance offer to trigger, even at or above 9 cum count, which I'm fairly sure is the only trigger, yeah? Maybe I'm missing something, I've never made a dialogue, I've only *cough* seen a bunch of them. I just liked this one and wanted to give you some advice because I want to see more of this. Or if it just picks a random offer each time, it could be I just got unlucky, but that feeds into my suggestion above.

    Once again, thanks a ton for your work. Have a good one guys!

    Edit: Yeah, it looks like some of the restart lines are a bit buggy, They display regardless of state and show about half of the check command line. I'd suggest a fix, but I honestly don't know why they're not working. Once again, never made a dialogue, let alone a dialogue which actually checks states. From what I do know, they look right, but I by no means know what I'm looking at.
     
  12. OzofMassage

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    I noticed when using the Dialogue check that the restarts were an issue. I will look into that soon. Work has me busy for the next two weeks so it will be a little bit before my next post.

    Thank you for the support!
     
  13. sevispac

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    Hey Oz,

    I'm new to both SDT and this forum, but I wanted to say thanks for the excellent work you did on 'Daughter's Friend'. Really enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

    sevispac
     
  14. rw141

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    Hey Oz,

    Freaking awesome. Great work. The only issue I have found is the restart. It goes black when switching characters in the Football Team Dia. and doesn't come back. Fix soon? Thanks man!