Hello, everyone. I decided longtime ago to create a thread of my original character, Petal Lang. I once created this thread because someone wants to see her in a peril, mainly beating. Also someone can be used her as a ryona material such as fiction. The arts are provided by my talented friend. Her DA: mikitaka on deviantART Her Pixiv: piw on [pixiv] I will post arts of her fight/ryona too. Any questions and suggestions are welcome. Her setting is a modern day, where many factions strife to dominate the world via business and military methods. Weapons, martial arts and even magic are developed for that. Spoiler: General It is in near future. There is a fight and many use force to take what they want. Some has large ambition. Country, government and army strengthen themself, and so gangs and terrorists. Many decided to use mercenary, because mercenary often needs only money to operate, while one group's man and other resources are safe. Mercenary usually conceals their client's information, so they are a choice for attacking when one wants to hide his identity. While this is important for terrorist vs. government battle, it's also a good thing for gang vs. gang or government vs. government. It's a time for soldier and mercenary. Many affiliations created their own group of combatants to protect them, make them their mercenary unit to earn money or for bigger goal... Bai Bi （白壁）, White Wall and Petals "A rose isn't beautiful with just a single petal." Found by Bai family in China, this group started as a company of fashionista business. After succeed in the area, they branched to food, housing, furniture and medicine. Now Bai Bi is one of the top company in East. Beneath their surface, Bai Bi deals in weapon business, however. That is a reason of their rapid grow. Bai Bi's current CEO, Bai Yong, thinks that if he possesses an absolute power, Bai Bi will be able to bring order to this world of fighting. While Bai Bi covered many business of basic items in life, they started making cloned soldiers that are known as Petals. These armed women are one of the staple forces that help Bai Yong achieves his ambition. But what is behind this ambition? While Bai Bi already has some armed units under command to protect them from attack, Petals are their best combatants. Skilled, smart, versatile and beautiful, Petals quickly became Bai Bi's main selling point in mercenary work. Even in their surface business, Petals fill in some positions like fashion model or receptionist. Petals Sketch These all female members of Petals are an orphans that Bai MeiHua, Yong's daughter, took under her wings after the great conflict that killed their family. At first, her father disagreed because he didn't want to spent money on taking care them while he was going to arm Bai Bi. However, his old and mysterious friend named Shen Long, with yet unknown reason, told him that he will train "fine soldiers" for Bai Bi. Years past and his words proven true. Bai MeiHua, daughter of Bai Bi's current CEO and head of Petal Project. With high physical abilities, unarmed skills, swordplay and gunfire, Petals can take various missions, both head-on and stealth. Petals are a force to reckon with in close combat, using quick strikes to takedown an opponent. They prefer light weight equipments and rely on speed and "Chi Armor" for protection. "Chi Armor"; an invisible layer of force that cover their skins. This chi layer can lessen an impact from an opponent’s blow or deflect low caliber bullet. So Petals are more endurance than they seem without any armors to slow down their movement. However, chi armor has a weakness. The layer harden skins but not bones or internal organs. So a submission holds or assault at vital points/nerve centers can still hurts Petals. Continuous attack can weaken the layer for a second and heavy blow or high caliber bullet also hurt them or break their bones, if the force is hard enough. And chi armor consumes chi overtime, Petals can’t activate the armor if one ran out chi. With their standard amount of Chi, the armor can stay active around 3 minutes at best. It also offers little to no protection against non-impact harms like poison gas or electricity. Since Chi Armor is activated with will, knocking Petal unconscious will completely shut the armor down. One who studies in the way of chi will know how to deal with Chi Armor. Many chi users know that chi is delivered through body via breathing. Thus, making Petal breath harder with choke hold or attack a spot like lung, belly or solar plexus can weaken her armor in no time. Disrupt chi with an attacking at lower dantian, a spot that generate chi located in lower belly, is a common knowledge among chi users as well. Of course, Chi Armor is less effective in an environment like underwater. Spoiler: Petal Lang "It's time for action!" Name: Lang (朗) Age: 21 Height/Weight: 165cm./51kg. 3 Sizes: B86 W55 H86 (cm.) Bio: One of the "Petal" and the most prominent one. She can be counted as both protagonist and zako, up to the story. Like others, Lang was trained to be Petal since young age. While she's confident and brave, she speaks in polite manners like other Petals, though be more casual outside business moment. Lang developed a deep care for her sisters, and be more outgoing. Thus, Lang can get along well with many Petals. In all Petal's arts like their version of Changquan (Long Fist) Kung Fu style, swordsmanship, driving, gunfire, computer and seduction, Lang most excels in the first three. Shenlong also spots Lang as a prodigy of melee combat, though the talent is not fully bloomed yet. Because of that, Lang's overall skills are better than many of Petal members. And she's good at both solo or paired mission. Like her sisters, her name was made from single Chinese letter. Lang is also known as "Gamer Petal". Because she likes to play a games when she has spared free time, occasionally with her sisters. Many of her games are actions, shooters or fighters. And many of them are a famous series like.... Spirit Calibur (Fighter series. A characters duel each other with weapon and rip the opponent's cloths), Sekken (Fighter series. Play as a fighters who join "Stone Fist Tournament"), Hell or Heaven (Fighter series. Famous for its male characters' muscular bodies), Kunoichi Gaiden (Action. Branch series of Hell or Heaven), Resident Devil (3rd Person Shooter. A series that started out as a full action shooter, but turned into Survival Horror in later games), Call of Responsibility 3548: Future Warfare (Shooter Series. Famous for releasing new game every week.), Blades of Kriegmar (RPG. An adventure of weird all-female party) and etc. Older arts and concepts. Bonus Dancing Spoiler: Petal Hui "May I help you?" Name: Hui (惠) Age: 21 Height/Weight: 165cm./50kg. 3 Sizes: B88 W55 H85 (cm.) Bio: One of the "Petal" and another prominent one. While Petals are trained to have a polite manners for being Bai Bi's main face of elite soldiers, Hui is more, if not most, polite and sweet of the sisters. Hui usually smiles most of the time and helps enlighten the Petals. She is also skilled in lady-like activities like sewing, cleaning or cooking. The very first one to befriended Lang after the lost their family. The two Petals grow a close relationship ever since. They often sparring together to improved their effective in combat, mission or bed skills. Compared to other Petals, Hui is a skilled sharpshooter. Older art. Spoiler: Fight!