edgelord 3000

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#1
WARNING
This features underage girls. Their ages are never stated, but from the way they talk, there's no denying that they're very much underage (or, at best, adults engaging in ageplay). If that's not your thing, you better stear clear of this one.

THE ENTIRE PREMISE
There are girls, and they are lost!

LOST GIRL 1
So, this is my first dialogue I've ever written after finally trying out this game a couple of weeks ago (which was December 2017-ish). The premise is that you're out wherever, and a young girl comes over and asks for some help. She's lost, you see, and being the awful human being you are, you decide to take advantage of her. However, she's actually very eager to please this nice mister she just met, so it's not all bad.

Most normal outdoors or public backgrounds make sense with this, clothes too. I recommend setting resistance to a high level, and I definitely recommend taking it slow in the beginning, or else you might end up regretting it...

LOST GIRL 2
The sequel! The premise is the same, a young girl is lost, and you pretend to help her. But doesn't she look kinda familiar?
I've made use of buttons this time (feature of dialogueactions), so you can choose positions.

As with LG1, you can use mostly all outdoors/public backgrounds and clothes. However, there's no "fail scenario" this time, so go nuts!

LOST GIRL 3
This one is all rape. And not the fun kind of rape. You brainwash a sobbing little girl with your cock. You monster.

During the intro there's a bit where you relocate, so feel free to choose any background you like. Maybe don't go for the police station. There's a few blackouts to simulate the passage of time in this one, which I only could make work so well, that is to say, it doesn't really work, but bear with me. There's a position button here as well.

LOST GIRL 4
More rape? Oh, the reverse kind! A little girl have taken advantage of your kindness and she's convinced you two are the perfect couple, yet is not entirely up-to-date with the process of getting pregnant. And is she holding a knife (Not really, but pretend she is. I have absolutely no idea how I would mod a knife into her hand)?

Again, most backgrounds and clothes should work well here. This is probably the most straight-forward dialogue of the bunch, so no buttons... except a couple that shows up at crucial moments.

LOST GIRL 5
So far all the girls have been fairly innocent... This one isn't. She's been around, and she knows what she likes. But what she likes might differ between each playtrough! Listen to her lines to figure out how to make her loins tremble (spoiler: it's either being held, giving handjobs, being rough with her, cumming inside her mouth or cumming on her face), or you could probably brute force it.

As usual, semi-public backgrounds works, while clothes can be just that little bit too slutty for a young girl, if you want. There's one button for the non-cheat version, which lets you choose between positions. Note: if you're using the sharpshooter mod, you're probably gonna get some schizophrenic lines during cumming when she's into cumming on her face or inside her mouth.

LOST GIRL 6
Straying further into anime tropes, we finally get a tsundere! Except she's all tsun and no dere... until you cum (or make her pass out, a more reliable way), then she'll be all dere no tsun. I can't decide if this is the craziest girl I've written, or if 4 is.

For some reason, I really enjoyed testing this one with a confused crowd as background, but you're your own boss and I won't decide which background you should choose. No buttons at all, just enjoy the ride!

LOST GIRL Z
And now for the DLCs! A spinoff of chapter 1, this one features a girl that is slowly becoming a zombie. Once she turns, you better restrain her somehow, or else she might bite your dick off.

I put this as a so-called DLC because 1) Most of the dialogue is copied straight from LG1 and 2) It was a request by Dio Brando, who also requested the features.

THINGS WORTH MENTIONING
- As of June 2018, I merged all the chapters into a single dialouge file. Select your favorite chapter and if you want to play it the normal way or the "cheaty" way. Normal way is always recommended on your first try, you don't want to miss the plot! Or take a chance with the Random Chapter button. All of the stories work on their own, except chapter 2 which is basically a direct sequel to 1.
- As of January 2019, there's now a Settings button in the main menu. Here you can select if Auto should be enabled (it's on by default) and at which pace the dialogues should progress. That's where the Random Chapter button is located as well.
- By default, the dialogues will turn on, turn off and change the Auto mode quite often. If you prefer to have control yourself, you can disable this by turning Auto off in the Settings menu. Note that if you do, you shouldn't turn auto mode on in SDTs menu, as it will most likely break things.
- I haven't been able to test this latest update as much as I would have liked. So in case there's a massive bug, the previous version of the dialogue is available to download as well.

HELP ME IMPROVE
I'd love some feedback on these dialogues, if there's any lines that's not making sense, if there are lines that are cringy (in context), if I can do certain things in a different and better way, suggestions for more lines and so forth. Oh, and I have a very fragile ego, so please say something nice about the dialogues as well (failing that, say something nice about me instead).
I've run them trough the dialoguechecker and they should be free of errors (except those related to moremoods and dialogdisplayedit, which DC doesn't know how to handle), barring any typos and whatnot.

REQUIREMENTS
- loader, can be downloaded here (if you're playing this game without this, you're playing it wrong)
- dialogueactions, can be downloaded here
- animtools, can be downloaded here
- moremoods, can be downloaded here
- dialogdisplayedit, can be downloaded here

HOW TO INSTALL
1.
Install the required mods.
2. Unpack the ZIP file into your Settings folder.
3. Done! Start up the game and load the dialogue.

OPTIONAL STUFF TO DO
- Get AnySizeHer for that authentic little girl experience, download it here
- Go into the settings file for dialogdisplayedit and change the ThoughtAlt1 color to something else than bright green. I suggest just going for the same color scheme as the regular Speak.
- If you want to switch out the positions for some of your own, you can do this by opening Lost Girls.txt, find the initial_settings line, and then exchange the "_pos_x" attribute values to a position file of your choice.

Last major update: 2019.01.07
 

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Nameless

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#3
Your standing position gives an error and the character are off screen. I tried fixing it and re-saving it and now animTools tells me "reversescreen invalid" but it works. You might want to try to remake it from scratch.

Not my taste but I love seeing new dialogue writers. Your project has a seemingly simple system, is very well organized, everything seems to work as intended and is well written. Good Work!
 

edgelord 3000

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#4
Your standing position gives an error and the character are off screen. I tried fixing it and re-saving it and now animTools tells me "reversescreen invalid" but it works. You might want to try to remake it from scratch.
That's strange, it worked reasonably well for me... But I did as you suggested and remade it from scratch, does it work properly for you now with the new file?
 

Sendboob

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#6
I do like the idea of people creating lolicon, since there's no longer a ban and no one has been doing it, so i appreciate u starting to create content on this. The dialogue itself is pretty well done, i hope u will carry on creating more of this content.
 

edgelord 3000

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#7
I'd love to make more lolicon dialogues, but I gotta have the right idea for it first. There's plenty of scenarios to choose from, but ultimately the lines would end up just reflecting if she likes being DP'd or hates it. I wouldn't like writing her hating it, and if she likes it, it would probably be too similar to this one...​
 

Sendboob

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#8
Assuming the DP abbreviation u wrote meant "double penetration", are there any DP mods around? I have not seen any yet so I can't really comment on that ( A link would be appreciated.)Although if there is, it does open a lot more options for dialogue, since it can be written as a gangbang setting, where she is talking to others. With multiple people in mind, there is also a scenario of giving BJ's to several people and switching everytime they cum, gloryhole kind of thing.

On another note, you could make the dialogue with a two way style, like u have already done, where if u go fast, the whole scenario becomes non-consensual, and if u go slow, the normal consensual scenario plays through for the rest of the game. But since you wouldn't like non-consensual i guess that suggestion is probably off the table.

In the end, if you believe that the DP, or any other scenario you have in mind would be too similar to this one, you could just expand on this current dialogue, adding more triggers and more variety and such.

That's my suggestions for now, I hope I was able to help give ideas in some ways, and I look forward to see what u plan to make.

P.S it may be helpful for you to post a download of the dialogue you have already made, as you may get more feedback there.
 

edgelord 3000

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#9
DP=DT, I typo'd. There are some mods that puts extra guys (or girls) around, but they're mostly for show.
I like actions to have consequences, so I definitely want to write something where if you do the wrong thing, you get punished for it. Or at least some sort of twist to the whole thing. For Lost Girl, I actually thought about having her revealing at the end that she knew what was happening and that she in fact wanted to suck his cock all along, but couldn't find the right lines for it. Maybe I'll make a LG2 where that's the case.

For now though, I think I'm gonna expand on this dialogue like you suggested, I noticed that there aren't enough triggers to change styles. Like, if I get tired of her giving me a handjob at a certain point, she would never actually change from that on her own and I'd have to go into the settings.
 

tw1istedsoul

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#13
Everything seemed to work just fine. :) I'm not into the whole under-age thing, but the dialogue worked well for me. I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your dialogues.
 

tharja.bestgirl

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#14
not sure this mod is working correctly to me. I'm using skip/cheat mode, and the sex button doesn't lead to any position changes, she simply says a line and then stays still. I've followed install instructions as best I can, but admittedly i am very new to moding this game. Any tips?
 

edgelord 3000

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#15
Sounds like an issue with the animtools position file "lostgirl2_sex.txt", did you use the one I provided or replace it with your own?
 
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Hank East

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#17
Hello there! I've run into a few issues with the dialogue. At least with Chapter 3, if the timeskip event happens the screen goes dark and stays that way until I reset the dialogue, could you look into it? BTW a bit of a suggestion, you might want to look into moremoods this mod. The panicked mood would be great for chapter 3, and the aggressive one for 4.
 

edgelord 3000

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#18
I wasn't able to replicate it myself, but I'm guessing the line triggering the END_FLASH got interrupted somehow. I moved the trigger so it hopefully shouldn't be a problem anymore.
As for moremoods, I definitely considered it, and will probably update the dialogues to make use of that mod in the not too distant future.
 

Seymour

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#19
I LOVE this bundle!

I DID find an issue in the third chapter.

An animtools position was missing, named lostgirl2_sex.txt
 

Pekpuuu

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#20
The lostgirl2_sex issue happens because the position text file provided is named lostgirls_sex and the dialogue refers to lostgirl2_sex. To fix it just rename it to lostgirl2_sex or edit the dialogue to refer to lostgirls_sex.
 
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