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Kisumi's Dialogues

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by KisumiKitsune, Mar 30, 2015.

  1. KisumiKitsune

    KisumiKitsune Potential Patron

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    I'm relatively new at all of this, but I have created my own dialogues initially designed to be representative of what my own character, Kisumi, would say. After a while I stripped down some of the specifics as I passed them around friends so they could be used for other characters without being out of place, and expanded toward areas I generally don't have an interest in. Whether or not I particularly like boobjobs, having a friend appreciate Kisumi giving one is nothing but a plus to me!

    It's nothing fancy compared to most of what's out here, but I'd be glad to take requests for things! Give me a situation, and I'll work on fleshing out what Kisumi would say if stuck in the middle there, of course without actual Sumi references. Generalize the tone as eager, slutty, and confident! Reccomend Animtools to allow for varied positions and situations.

    Some of the files aren't saving as .txt, they will still load fine.
    Eager Anal - Just what it sounds like.
    Eager Oral - Just what it sounds like.
    Eager Titjob - Just what it sounds like.
    Clueless Oral - Requested by super-skrull, scenario is blindfolded and not used to the concept of sex. Supposedly "tricked" into it.
    Eager Secret Oral - Requested by super-skrull, scenario is Sumi sucking someone off under a desk and too excited to stop whispering things to him about it.
    Eager Embarrassed Pool Party - Requested by super-skrull, scenario is Kisumi noticing a guy at a pool party embarrassed by his boner in the shorts. She sucks him off to "help" him.

    Just for fun. Recommend Momitail in white (adjusted with pants color) for completeness.
    Code:
    charName:Kisumi;mood:Happy;bodyScale:0.95;arms:onlegs,onlegs;throatResist:50;hair:nami,1,1,1;iris:solid,108,0,0,1;breasts:94;skin:light;nose:normal;ear:small;lipstick:0,0,0,0,0;eyeshadow:55,26,99,0;sclera:255,255,255,1;blush:196,80,77,0.529;freckles:60,24,24,0.8,0;mascara:0,0,0,1,20;nailpolish:0,0,0,0;eyebrow:normal,255,255,255,1,105,121,137,1;hairhsl:-180,0.15,1.73,1;skinhsl:5,1.1,1.1,1;hisskinhsl:8,1,1.22,1;bg:3;hisBody:male;hisPenis:0,1,1;balls:0,1;hisSkin:0;hisTop:none,238,242,245,1;hisBottoms:none,27,29,29,1;hisFootwear:none,0,0,0,1;collar:none,0,0,0,1,40,45,0,1;cuffs:none,177,149,102,1,87,0,0,1;gag:none,40,45,0,1;panties:none,255,255,255,1;top:none,255,255,255,1;armwear:none,0,0,0,1;legwear:none,0,0,0,1,87,0,0,1;footwear:none,0,0,0,1,40,45,0,1;eyewear:none,0,0,0,1;headwear:catears,232,245,255,1,255,255,255,1;tonguePiercing:none,0,0,82,1;herTan:none,0
     

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  2. super-skrull

    super-skrull Potential Patron

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    You should make more please this is great stuff.
     
  3. KisumiKitsune

    KisumiKitsune Potential Patron

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    Sure would if anyone would use them! Any requests for situations / mood? I'll make these Kisumi-flavored, meaning what she would say, but give me a context and I'll plug her into it!
     
  4. super-skrull

    super-skrull Potential Patron

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    I would love to see a dialog that takes place before she knew much about sex and was blindfolded and tricked into giving a blowjob.

    How about one where she is trying to secretly give someone a blowjob at his desk and keeps talking to him because she is so excited about it.
     
  5. KisumiKitsune

    KisumiKitsune Potential Patron

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    Wish granted! Two new dialogue options attached to the OP for you. Enjoy!
     
  6. Lizoran

    Lizoran Avid Affiliate

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    Those are some nice dialogues, good job
    Also i made a clothed variation for her just for fun, hope you don't mind
    Code:
    charName:Kisumi;mood:Happy;bodyScale:0.95;arms:onlegs,onlegs;throatResist:29;hair:nami,1,1,1;iris:solid,108,0,0,1;breasts:94;skin:light;nose:normal;ear:small;lipstick:0,0,0,0,0;eyeshadow:55,26,99,0;sclera:255,255,255,1;blush:196,80,77,0.529;freckles:60,24,24,0.8,0;mascara:0,0,0,1,20;nailpolish:0,0,0,0;eyebrow:normal,255,255,255,1,105,121,137,1;hairhsl:-180,0.15,1.73,1;skinhsl:5,1.1,1.1,1;hisskinhsl:0,1,1,1;bg:3;hisBody:male;hisPenis:1,1.1695,1.1695;balls:1,1;hisSkin:1;hisTop:shirt,195,0,0,1;hisBottoms:slacks,0,0,0,1;hisFootwear:loafers,27,29,29,1;collar:none,0,0,0,1,40,45,0,1;cuffs:none,177,149,102,1,87,0,0,1;gag:none,40,45,0,1;panties:bikini,255,255,255,1;top:bikini,255,255,255,1;armwear:none,0,0,0,1;bottoms:jeanshorts,63,118,162,1,98,140,115,1;tops:tank,135,201,255,1;legwear:none,0,0,0,1,87,0,0,1;footwear:school,0,0,0,1,254,248,238,1;eyewear:none,0,0,0,1;headwear:catears,232,245,255,1,255,255,255,1;tonguePiercing:none,0,0,82,1;herTan:none,0
     
  7. aztlan

    aztlan Swell Supporter

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    What is this supposed to do?

    vigorous:"*Panting.*"
     
  8. KisumiKitsune

    KisumiKitsune Potential Patron

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    I'm not super-familiar with the coding aspect of dialogue. It's supposed to just be a notation to her actions, are asterisks hijacked to do something else?

    As for clothed version, whatever works for you!
     
  9. f93

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    Asterisks around a word mean that it's treated as a variable (like the *YOU* and *ME* values). It'll try to substitute whatever value it thinks is in the "Panting" variable instead, which may cause some problems. Try using "%2A" in place of "*".


    Otherwise these are actually pretty good first attempts at dialogues.
     
  10. KisumiKitsune

    KisumiKitsune Potential Patron

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    Well, I tried my hand at rewriting a few to work around the asterisks. Unfortunately it seems any code for an asterisk still works as one, meaning nothing shows up. Is there another accepted symbol for actions? If there's no alternative, would it be too bad form to just leave it in as junk code, or should I modify the files and clean the actions out?

    Thanks for the support!
     
  11. aztlan

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    What about just using some other symbols (that don't affect the game), like:

    vigorous:"<Panting>"
     
  12. KisumiKitsune

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    Thanks for the feedback on formatting. I've updated all dialogues above to not derp out with asterisks!
     
  13. zzaapp002

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    These seem very promising...
     
  14. super-skrull

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    How about a dialog where a guy gets an erection at a pool party and he is embarassed about it and Kisumi feels sorry for him and wants to help him with it by sucking on it.
     
  15. DarkGabriel1701G

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    These are good dialogues for a very lovely character, thank you. :3
     
  16. DarkGabriel1701G

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    Oh hey, just a little question, does Kisumi have a custom hair or just the vanilla one? Thank's.
     
  17. KisumiKitsune

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    No custom hair for Sumi, I just used a vanilla hair that works well enough. Possibly in the future I might commission a tail and hair that are just right, but the options available right now are good enough, so it's not high on priority.

    Also I haven't forgotten you, Skrull. I'll get around to it.
     
  18. KisumiKitsune

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    Super sorry for the delay! Let it never be said I flaked, though. Dialogue up!

    It's got a few repeated lines from other dialogue sets. Making every single one about pools or being embarrassed would kinda be nonsense.
     
  19. Pim_gd

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    Please upload your dialogues as ".txt".

    That allows my computer to recognize them as text files.

    Additionally, you should make use of the DialogueChecker if possible (link in signature). Here's the output for your latest dialogue:
    Dialogue was checked in 12 ms with v3.01dev of the DialogueChecker.
    I found 4 issue(s) with your dialogue, of which 0 were severe, 1 were major issues, and 3 were minor issues.

    Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
    Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
    Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 31, col 18 near "swallow:"Name's... , (...)"
    Line 31: swallow:"Name's... * YOU*, was it? I like you~"
    Stripped Line 31: swallow:"Name's... , was it? I like you~"

    Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
    Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
    Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 45, col 14 near "restart:"C'mon , (...)"
    Line 45: restart:"C'mon * YOU*, we can break *FINISHES* easy~"
    Stripped Line 45: restart:"C'mon , we can break *FINISHES* easy~"

    Syntax - Major: More than 2 double quotes were found on line 52, but the line didn't have lineattributes. Did you accidentally put a double quote (") in the line?
    If you want to have double quotes in your line, you should replace them with %22. SDT will replace %22 with " when playing the dialogue, but it won't interfere with loading the dialogue.
    If you were to keep the double quotes in the line as it is now, the line will be cut short after the second double quote. There's likely an "excess characters" issue for this line as well - that's what will get cut off.
    Line 52: first_throat:"<Panting.> How's that? You need more "comforting"?"

    Syntax - Minor: Excess characters (comforting"?") after line attributes on line 52. This indicates a syntax error.
    Line 52: first_throat:"<Panting.> How's that? You need more "comforting"?"

    Once you've fixed these issues, try letting me look your dialogue over again. Maybe I'll find something new.