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- Dec 26, 2009
So I commissioned Ray to make for me a Supergirl film. I described the concept and had various requests, I also picked the actress.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1G8a6lEvYU
I love the leading girl. Good actress, adorable, sexy, goofy sense of humour.
Ray basically took my concept and my various demands and wrote it in a way that it's kind of safe for a more general audience rather than just dirty minded fucks like myself. It's actually a pretty funny script at parts, so Ray gets a thumbs up for that.
"I'm totally your play thing", "I'll degrade myself and dance for you", fuck yeah.
Criticisms:
-Lighting
-Wish the first scene was longer, more drawn out. Could have happily watched 20 minutes of Supersam as a degraded slave, trying to please with a smile on her face.
-Would have liked a reaction shot of Sam while she was on all fours. The ass shot is amazing, but I think a reaction shot would have really added a lot.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1G8a6lEvYU
I love the leading girl. Good actress, adorable, sexy, goofy sense of humour.
Ray basically took my concept and my various demands and wrote it in a way that it's kind of safe for a more general audience rather than just dirty minded fucks like myself. It's actually a pretty funny script at parts, so Ray gets a thumbs up for that.
"I'm totally your play thing", "I'll degrade myself and dance for you", fuck yeah.
Criticisms:
-Lighting
-Wish the first scene was longer, more drawn out. Could have happily watched 20 minutes of Supersam as a degraded slave, trying to please with a smile on her face.
-Would have liked a reaction shot of Sam while she was on all fours. The ass shot is amazing, but I think a reaction shot would have really added a lot.
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