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Eager Girl dialogue

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by DearSfan31, Nov 15, 2011.

  1. DearSfan31

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    Wassup. I been a fan of this game since it first started n I wanted to make a dialogue for it. This is the first time I've ever wrote anything like this so I'm not sure how it turned out. My aim for this was to try n make a girl that's kinda upbeat n happy with what she's doing. Somehow she ended up being like Soul Calibers' tira. Well...her good side anyway. I might do more later. I don't kno yet. Feedback is very much appreciated sp let me kno if it sux. Enjoy fellow pervs lol

    EDIT-Well I got bored again n I figured this need a few more lines so he u go! I tweeked a few of the lines from the first one too. As always, enjoy fellow pervs
     

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  2. neko-lover

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    i like it!
     
  3. DearSfan31

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    Awsome! Glad to kno somebody likes my stuff. To b honest I was just bored as hell n this is what bcame of it lol
     
  4. Shybear

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    I like it aswell. Have you considered trying to include some of the new dialogue options that were added recently? Would love to break her eagerness after a few times passing out or something and flip her to agehao mode. I was a little worried after seeing how you type on the boards but the .txt is very nicely written. Will look over it again later but so far all i could ask for is probably more lines.

    Kudos to you.
     
  5. DearSfan31

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    Well u c i litteraly just learned how to make a dialogue for this game a few days ago lol. I could probably learn how to incorporate the new system features but at the moment I want to get more comfortable with my writing skills first. Thanx for the suggestion tho. I'll defenetly try doing that sumtime. Sounds like a challenge n I like challenges. As for adding new lines, I'll probably end up doing that too. I look at this txt everyday n think of new things to add to make it better
     
  6. Shybear

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    You're a true gent and scholar. Will be checking back regularly. 8)
     
  7. DearSfan31

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    Thanx. I'll try n add sum new lines tonight
     
  8. Croix

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    Nice one. This dialogue also deservs to be voiced.
     
  9. DearSfan31

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    wish i knew someone who would voice it for me.
     
  10. Shybear

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    I've asked the girl who voiced the Nympho script.. we'll see if anything happens or if she even accepts..
     
  11. DearSfan31

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    That'd b great. I jus have no idea how making a voiced dialogue works lol.
     
  12. Croix

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    The one who did the Insecure script would be better. This dialogue needs a higher and cuter voice and not a naughty one. Especially since this script has a lot of 'laughing' part.
     
  13. DearSfan31

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    I consider it an honor just to have people that r trying to get this voiced. I'm happy no matter who voices this