Coc Minotaur (1 Viewer)

[nop223]

Short, and unfinished. I basically got bored and gave up, so here.
If anyone wants to continue it, go ahead.

 

[f93]

Hey, another CoC fan! I wrote a dialogue with a similar concept ages ago - Minotaur Cum Addict. Though that was for the minotaur bad end rather than the gloryhole scene.

The reason the Chapter stuff isn't working is because you never declared it as a variable. So it checks if Chapter is set to 0 and always fails, as it was never set to anything at all).
To fix that you need to have the line

initial_settings:{"chapter":0}

I'm fairly sure you should also just be setting it to 1 instead of trying to add 1, as even if you're planning more chapters it'd make more sense to only be able to move to specific chapters instead of just moving to whatever one is next.

Stylistically it's weird that some of the narration is Him and some is Thought. If the Minotaur isn't speaking it doesn't really matter which one is used, so just stick with whatever one looks better (probably Him).

 

[nop223]

Hey, another CoC fan! I wrote a dialogue with a similar concept ages ago - Minotaur Cum Addict. Though that was for the minotaur bad end rather than the gloryhole scene.

The reason the Chapter stuff isn't working is because you never declared it as a variable. So it checks if Chapter is set to 0 and always fails, as it was never set to anything at all).
To fix that you need to have the line

initial_settings:{"chapter":0}

I'm fairly sure you should also just be setting it to 1 instead of trying to add 1, as even if you're planning more chapters it'd make more sense to only be able to move to specific chapters instead of just moving to whatever one is next.

Stylistically it's weird that some of the narration is Him and some is Thought. If the Minotaur isn't speaking it doesn't really matter which one is used, so just stick with whatever one looks better (probably Him).

Wow, thanks!
Yeah, I was actually inspired by your dialogue, so I'm really surprised to see that you replied.
I appreciate it.

You can probably tell that I had no clue what I was doing, lol.
But like I said in the original post, feel free to edit it and make this dialogue your own!

 

[Apollion]

Hey, another CoC fan! I wrote a dialogue with a similar concept ages ago - Minotaur Cum Addict. Though that was for the minotaur bad end rather than the gloryhole scene.

The reason the Chapter stuff isn't working is because you never declared it as a variable. So it checks if Chapter is set to 0 and always fails, as it was never set to anything at all).
To fix that you need to have the line

initial_settings:{"chapter":0}

I'm fairly sure you should also just be setting it to 1 instead of trying to add 1, as even if you're planning more chapters it'd make more sense to only be able to move to specific chapters instead of just moving to whatever one is next.

Stylistically it's weird that some of the narration is Him and some is Thought. If the Minotaur isn't speaking it doesn't really matter which one is used, so just stick with whatever one looks better (probably Him).

I would love to see it, but It seems to have been removed... as I am also a Coc Fan :D

 

[fleet]

I would love to see it, but It seems to have been removed... as I am also a Coc Fan :D

It was deleted by the creator ( f93 ) who last logged in back in January 2019. You can send him a private conversation, but don't be surprised if there is no response.
Very respectfully,
fleet (global moderator)