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Cheating/Cuckold Dialogue

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by louise, Sep 7, 2013.

  1. louise

    louise Guest

    Just a cheating/cuckold dialogue.
    Here's a screen http://picpaste.com/pics/screenshot0003.1378520605.png
    Pretty masochistic lines, toilet play etc
    Feedback would be nice.
    Enjoy being cheated on/fucking a cheating whore!

    Edit: Fixed a few things and improved a bit.

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  2. AaRL

    AaRL Swell Supporter

    Feb 17, 2011
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    Your dialogue doesn't contain an intro. Try adding one to set the table (mood and flow) for the rest of the dialogue.
    Add triggers such as [BLINK], arm movements and mood changes. They will liven up your dialogue.
    You might want to create a character code to further enhance the dialogue.

    Check out other dialogues around the forums and check the sticked guide up top for more tips.