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Break a girl / Porn

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Rogue, Mar 16, 2013.

  1. Rogue

    Rogue Potential Patron

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    Warning: The dialogue contains heavy language and is pretty hardcore.

    This dialogue is inspired by the well-known porn movies with the yellow couches.
    The story is the following: You find an 18 year old schoolgirl on a playground and tell her that you have a lolli at home that you want to show her. You take her home let her dress even sluttier and then put her on her knees to show her that lolli. At first she's enthusiastic but that changes later on.
    As in the mentioned porn movies, the guy likes to talk a lot and will brabble the whole time. And as in all porn movies you won't ever see her thinking.

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    example line:
    general:"Say: Pump the little teenie. [general14]"{"style":"Him"}
    general14:"Pump the little teenie, Mister"

    To start the game, wait for the whole intro to happen, which should give you the good settings.
    starting with angry mood: Get's you the intended setting
    starting with happy mood: Jumps the intro
    starting with normal mood: Keep your facefuckstyle- and hand- settings (which will make one only line unlogical)

    Sugested char:
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    charName:Slut;mood:Normal;bodyScale:0.97875;arms:onhislegs;throatResist:74;hair:asuka,1,1,1;iris:bright,23,57,102,1;breasts:90;skin:tan;nose:normal;ear:normal;lipstick:0,241,0,6,0.722;eyeshadow:255,48,109,1;sclera:255,255,255,1;blush:196,80,77,0.702;freckles:60,24,24,0.8,0;mascara:0,0,0,1,100;nailpolish:0,0,0,0;eyebrow:normal,87,53,32,1,56,42,32,1;hairhsl:-18,0.67,2.34,1.11;skinhsl:0,1.92,0.99,1.01;hisskinhsl:0,1,1,1;bg:3;hisBody:male;hisPenis:1,1,1;balls:0,1;hisSkin:0;hisTop:shirt,212,31,0,1;hisBottoms:none,27,29,29,1;hisFootwear:loafers,0,0,0,1;collar:gemchoker,197,64,109,1,255,167,188,1;cuffs:none,0,0,0,1,171,177,185,1;ankleCuffs:panties,255,255,46,1,148,165,42,1;gag:none,0,55,2,1;panties:none,255,255,255,1;top:none,255,255,39,1;armwear:none,0,0,0,1;bottoms:miniskirt,225,64,109,1,197,64,109,1;tops:cropped,255,255,0,0.855;legwear:stripedsock,255,255,255,0.8,255,126,167,0.8;footwear:none,255,255,0,1,255,255,255,1;eyewear:none,0,0,0,1;headwear:none,148,165,42,1,0,55,2,1;tonguePiercing:none,148,165,42,1;bellyPiercing:stud,183,187,195,1;earring:teardrop,255,167,188,1;herTan:none,0;swfMod:platforms.swf,11
    Sugested background: something with a yellow couch

    Further hints:
    Pull her up to slap her (this doesn't ever influence her mood (and it doesn't always work...)).
    Put your last name or something similar ( e.g. Hardcore) for your own name.
    Please use the plateau shoes by faceless: http://superdeepthroat.ryonani.com/index.php?topic=2574.0
    There is an ending sequence.
    There is a "happy ending" that appears if your not mean enough (and lucky)

    The dialogues mechanics was initally inspired by slingerbuilts schoolgirl dialogue there is a reference-line to his work somewhere.

    And a big thank you to all the guys working on this game and its features.

    Feel free to work on the text or correct errors.
     

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  2. Alpharius

    Alpharius Avid Affiliate

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    I like to imagine myself an experienced porn viewer, but what is this yellow couch you speak of?
     
  3. Pim_gd

    Pim_gd Swell Supporter

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    The internal organization of this dialogue is messy for sure...
    It's hard to keep track of what each character is. I suggest splitting up the lines by "character" and then by type instead of first by type then by character because I can't follow the dialogue's flow, so to say.

    introC:"...blah blah blah, with the professor blah blah blah! [HAPPY_MOOD]So yeah, blah blah blah.. [BLINK][introC]"

    only one line?

    interrupt:"-mphh!" [OPEN_EYES]
    oh god i have no idea how that got here maybe you are bad with computer

    ... And that's some nasty dialogue, by the way. Not a real fan of rape like this.
     

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  4. astounded

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    Thanks for your work! I enjoyed the rough dialog. Sometimes I feel I need a logic map to get the right triggers to work but that will come.

    You can probably make it even better with bit more polish.. maybe also consider supporting the new handjob triggers? ;D

    Thanks again.
     
  5. deafie

    deafie Potential Patron

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    Oh man, this dialog is straight up Max Hardcore bits, believe that. You mentioned slutty dresses, lolli, couches, and platform shores...