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Blackmail Mom

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Firestorm5, Jan 8, 2015.

  1. Firestorm5

    Firestorm5 Vivacious Visitor

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    the son is blackmailing his mom over a video containing some incriminating things. I've held on to this for a year refining it I hope you all enjoy it.
    the lines are pretty even between him and her. it is not a lovey dovey conversation between these two.
    If there is any problem within the text please respond because feedback is the key to perfection.
     

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  2. EpicDT-Hunter1

    EpicDT-Hunter1 Potential Patron

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    Hey I must honestly say i pretty enjoyed it. The only problem i have is the amount of grammatical mistakes and the missing of lick_penis, lick_balls lines. But all in one not bad for a start. Keep it up :D
     
  3. Spiralmask

    Spiralmask Potential Patron

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    please pardon the horrifying necroposting, made some edits/corrections/etc.
     

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