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Black Girl on White Boy

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by warg, Apr 8, 2013.

  1. warg

    warg Potential Patron

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    Hello, everyone! This is my first shot at a dialogue and I'm reasonably happy with it so I thought I would share. I can't draw for shit so this is really the only way I can contribute. I use a lot of "Thought" lines because I don't like interrupting the action so she can run her mouth. I try to make her spoken lines for when she would logically not have a mouthful. I was trying to make her sound a little ghetto so there are intentional spelling and grammar mistakes but if you find any that do not seem to be a part of the scene, please let me know so I can correct them. Enjoy! I hope it is worth your time.
     

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  2. riddick1970

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    Grat job, dude really amazing. ;D
    Thanks.
     
  3. Renin

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    That's really good. Great dialogue.
     
  4. mistgun

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    Awesome work man!
     
  5. Col. John Konrad

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    Oh this is fucking amazing man, now all we need are some templates to go with it <_<
     
  6. danielfww

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    thx man