Black Girl on White Boy (1 Viewer)

[warg]

Hello, everyone! This is my first shot at a dialogue and I'm reasonably happy with it so I thought I would share. I can't draw for shit so this is really the only way I can contribute. I use a lot of "Thought" lines because I don't like interrupting the action so she can run her mouth. I try to make her spoken lines for when she would logically not have a mouthful. I was trying to make her sound a little ghetto so there are intentional spelling and grammar mistakes but if you find any that do not seem to be a part of the scene, please let me know so I can correct them. Enjoy! I hope it is worth your time.

 

[riddick1970]

Grat job, dude really amazing. ;D
Thanks.

 

[Renin]

That's really good. Great dialogue.

 

[mistgun]

Awesome work man!

 

[Col. John Konrad]

Oh this is fucking amazing man, now all we need are some templates to go with it <_<

 

[danielfww]

thx man

 

[Benny102]

I made this template to go with the dialogue, I tried to make the characters match the dialogue as much as possible (including a little bit of my own taste ) , I also tried keeping the design and changes to a minimum so there is always some wiggle room (pun intended) , Enjoy!

Spoiler: Character Code

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[tmb]

And here's a fixed version of the dialogue I made using @Pim_gd's DialogueChecker.

 

[tw1istedsoul]

This is a pretty awesome dialogue. :) Just wish you could switch her to the positions she mentions. :) I did a little bit of play with doing that with Samoth's loader. :)