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[Kargan3033]

this might turn out to be my longest story so far... >.>

Sweet!

The flow and tempo of the story is good and I'm sure you have something *Nice* in story for cammy and chun as well as some *Sweet* for us readers.

 

[h0ly123]

The quicker the better these are awesome.

 

[Kargan3033]

Chapter six was well done Ghost, if you are worried about how fast it is taking between chapters don't I find that taking time on a chapter is a good thing, gives you time to really make it a master work instead of a rushed hack job.

 

[Kargan3033]

Nicely done Ghost, looks like chuner's can't catch a brake no matter what she does now that cammy has been eliminated I have to wonder just how badly chuner's is going to suffer in chapter eight.

 

[allhailsabin]

Damn, even when they fight legit they lost! Poor Chun. She was a second away from being free, now instead Cammy got pinned. Chun's probably gonna have to tap again ;)

 

[Kargan3033]

Chun's probably gonna have to tap again ;)

That is if she doesn't get her ass *tapped* into a coma.

 

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Damn, even when they fight legit they lost! Poor Chun. She was a second away from being free, now instead Cammy got pinned. Chun's probably gonna have to tap again ;)

Well they were forced into getting tossed around quite a bit before it became a fair fight lol

 

[allhailsabin]

Well they were forced into getting tossed around quite a bit before it became a fair fight lol

Ehhh, we'll leave that part out ;)

 

[Kargan3033]

Swwet!, a nice finisher for this fight I wonder what cammy will be thinking when she wakes up in the med station, will she be relieved that she no longer has to fight or will to relief be tainted by the fact that her *Friend*(who she failed to protect)has nothing more then a long life of humiliation and beatings.

 

[bval]

Really really fantastic story! I hope there's some bone breaking in the future!

 

[Axl2500]

Alright, this was awesome! hope you keep up the good work