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A Crown of Thorns - Reiko Hinomoto

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    --PART ONE--


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    "AAGGGHH!!" The champion's cry echoed throughout the arena as the fired up crowd roared in excitement.

    "Ladies and gentlemen we could be witnessing one of the biggest upsets in recent Rumble Roses history! The Zero Fighter Reiko has the dastardly dom Mistress Spencer in an excruciating abdominal stretch! Will Spencer be forced to give up both the match and her Rose of Roses Title to one of Rumble Roses most promising up and coming fighters?!"

    "Ngh... Do you give?!" Reiko demanded as she contorted her more experienced opponent's core to an unnatural angle, her tight red sports bra and short shorts hugging every supple, battle-hardened curve of her athletic body.

    The Mistress merely furrowed her brow and grimaced in disgust at the question. "No way am I losing to this brat!!" she thought to herself moments before Reiko had given up on the hold and dropped Spencer to the ground in a sorry heap. She stared up at the lights as she haggardly caught her breath, her heaving chest barely contained by her red and white corset.

    The Zero Fighter was in no better shape as she rested her hands on her knees. Reiko had taken an equal amount of punishment from this grueling battle of attrition. Each fighter had thrown everything they had at the other and now it just came down to whose body would give out first.

    Reiko had regained her composure and walked over to her downed opponent. She reached for her arm and with a grunt hauled the dominatrix to her feet. The wrestlers caught eyes for a moment as they stood face to face and their hot breaths danced between them.

    From there, Reiko secured Spencer's arm and roared as she Irish whipped her into the corner. "GAH!" Spencer yelped as the post collided with the spot between her shoulders, slightly knocking the wind from her.

    "Here we go!!" Reiko shouted, playing to the crowd as she sauntered to the opposite corner. The Zero Fighter grabbed the ropes around her and crouched down, ready to lunge. "This is it... I've almost made it, Mother..." At this moment Reiko saw nothing else but her opponent in front of her. Spencer was all that stood between her and fulfilling the promise she had made to her mother to be the best fighter in the Rumble Roses Wrestling League. So close... She honed in and felt the fire rise into her tired legs, ready to explode into a devastating spear..

    "Go, Reiko... " The young Japanese woman thought to herself as her leg began to torque. "... GO!!! ---- OUF!!"

    The young fighter unceremoniously landed flat on her chest, her momentum abruptly taken from her. "W-... what happened?" She frantically pondered as she looked down at her foot. "..WHAT?!"

    "SEBASTIAN?? Where the hell did he come from?! Ladies and gentlemen, it seems that Mistress Spencer's ... uh... escort? ... sure. -ahem- Mistress Spencer's escort has been waiting underneath the ring this entire match!!"

    "Damn!" Reiko grimaced as the crowd boo'd at the poor display of sportsmanship. The clown stared at her from outside the ring with a sickening smile as his grubby paws clamped around Reiko's red boot. "HUURRAAGGHH!!" he roared as he dragged Reiko right out of the ring and she landed hard on the arena floor.

    -WHUMP-

    "OUF!!" the Zero Fighter gasped as the wind was knocked from her lungs. Sebastian wouldn't allow the young girl to recover, however, as the clown wrestler immediately sat upon Reiko's lower back. From there, he forced her arms over his thighs, one by one, as he locked his fingers underneath the young woman's chin and began to pull her into a painful camel clutch.

    "YAAAHHH!!!" Reiko shrieked as her back was bent into an unhealthy angle and her head was wrenched back, forcing her ample chest to jut out as she stared directly at the arena ceiling in agony. She felt her pelvis being crushed between Sebastian's weight and the hard arena floor, which only worsened her pain.. no mat meant no small give..

    "Took you long enough, Sebastian.." Mistress Spencer huffed as she weaved her way between the ropes and down to the arena floor to join the others. She wore a wry grin as she approached her helpless opponent. "Reiko Hinomoto... not so smug now, are we?" she chuckled. "Sebastian. Up!"

    With that order, the male wrestler immediately released his hold and stepped over the young woman as she plopped to the ground, her skin glistening with sweat. Her relief would be short lived however as he then grabbed two handfuls or her scruffy brown hair from behind to haul her to a stand. Reiko winced at the pain burning her scalp as she was forced to her feet. Her legs felt wobbly and she could barely lift her arms to fight back. She felt helpless as she could merely stare at the dominatrix.

    "Full nelson, Sebastian." was all Reiko heard before she felt the clown's large arms snake their way underneath her own and she felt two large hands locking tight behind her head, forcing her into an uncomfortably defenseless position.

    Mistress Spencer approached the younger fighter and chuckled. "My, My.. What happened to all that... BRAVADO?!" She asked as she punctuated her question with a furious fist to Reiko's taught belly. "OUF!" was all that could escape the Zero Fighter's' mouth as her whole body bucked against Sebastian's. The blow caused the young woman to double over only to be brought to a stand again by her captor. Spencer saw this as an opportunity to let out some of the built up aggression she had for Reiko. The dominatrix's exposed eye went wide as she clenched her fist and maliciously laid into the Japanese woman's defenseless stomach, one blow after another.

    -WHUMP-

    -WHUMP-

    -WHUMP-

    "NGH! NGH!! NGH!!" Reiko bounced as uppercut after uppercut connected with her solar plexus, taking the wind from her little by little as her mouth hung agape in pain.

    Spencer breathed heavily in her rage but quickly corrected her hair as she regained her cold demeanor, the wry grin again occupying her face. She was inches away from Reiko, whose head was hanging in pain. Spencer looked down upon her opponent as she placed her index finger under the young Japanese woman's chin and slowly lifted her head to lock eyes. She saw her anguish and savored every second.. Reiko's hair was matted to the sweat on her forehead, her big hazel eyes wore tired and her glossy lips were just barely parted in pain. The dominatrix's free hand delicately found its way to Reiko's glistening stomach and began to gently rub it up and down, almost seductively, as the Zero Fighter's face grew flush from embarrassment. The caress was short lived however... Spencer reached down to where Reiko's already revealing shorts remained unbuttoned. She grabbed at the black latex band of Reiko's white panties and, with a wicked smile, harshly yanked upward. Reiko's eyes went wide and she gritted her teeth in anguish as Mistress Spencer tormented her crotch with her own undergarments. Reiko's legs thrashed as her face went completely red, Spencer laughing all the while... She wanted to humiliate the young woman.

    Spencer eventually released Reiko's delicates and the thrashing stopped. The Zero Fighter's head hung low and her chest heaved while still trapped in Sebastian's full nelson. "I... I can't take much more... Mother..." she woefully thought to herself.

    The Mistress had had enough and signaled to her clown lackey to toss her opponent into the ring and he simply nodded to his mistress in compliance. Sebastian, however, had something small in store before he fulfilled her wish... he was sure Mistress Spencer wouldn't mind. With a malicious smirk, Sebastian released his hold and gripped underneath Reiko's supple thighs. He roared as he hauled her skyward, putting a look of shock and fear on the young woman's face. The Japanese wrestler felt weightless in his grip as the arena ceiling came into view. The Zero Fighter floated above Sebastian for a short moment as the audience gasped... She soon felt the vile clown spread her legs (her small red trunks not made with modesty in mind) right before harshly bringing her down to a sit onto his extended knee in a devastating atomic drop.

    "YAAAAAHHH!!!!" She screamed as she felt fire spread throughout her tailbone and most of her backside. Her arms fell limp to her sides and her head again fell in exhaustion as she sat upon Sebastian's knee. She panted as her chest heaved, every labored breath bridled with pain. The mistress did indeed approve of her accomplice's improvisation. Sebastian let go of Reiko's thighs as he grabbed the back of her red scarf with one hand and brought her to a stand, she was almost lifeless in his grip. He used his other hand to grip the back of the young woman's small red trunks as he yanked hard to toss her underneath the bottom rope, causing her to roll on the way in. She came to a rest face down on the mat, shorts riding slightly higher than normal.

    The duo soon followed suit as the crowd's jeers filled the arena. The dominatrix stood proud as she merely gestured to Reiko to command her lackey. He complied as he reached down for her head and slowly brought the winded fighter to a stand. She could offer no resistance. Mistress Spencer slowly slinked around her opponent towards her cohort. She smiled as she covered her mouth and silently whispered something in to his ear. Sebastian ominously smiled and nodded.

    The clown effortlessly forced the Zero Fighter into a front headlock. "ngh..." Reiko quietly protested. She could do nothing to fight out in her present state, her arms merely hung limp beneath her. Spencer walked up beside Sebastian and slinked her arm around Reiko's head to make it a double headlock. Reiko's tired face grew worried.. The duo then threw each of her arms over their respective shoulders. "A... a double suplex?..." Reiko fearfully thought to herself. Her fear was soon replaced with terror as she felt her opponents' free hands grab the back of her knees..

    "N-NO! What are you--- AHH!!" She yelped as she as hauled skyward. Her stomach was filled with butterflies as she defied gravity in their grip and her world was turned upside down. She saw the ring above her and the audience below her as her neck rested on the duo's shoulders and her legs were hooked and spread by both wrestlers, cradling her tired body. Reiko's opponents had lifter her high into the sky and secured her in a double fisherman's buster..

    The young Japanese woman had a terrified look on her face "A drop from this high... I- I can't take it.. I'll be knocked out... No... Mother.."

    Spencer and Sebastian held Reiko upside down, locked in their maneuver for a short while as the sweat on Reiko's body drifted from her stomach to her chest. "no.." Reiko thought to herself. She could do nothing.

    Soon, the duo looked at each other ominously and, in unison, yanked down on their opponent's legs as they fell straight to the floor.

    -THUD-

    Reiko's eyes had gone blank... Her neck and upper back impacted the mat at a sharp angle, worsened by the added velocity of Spencer and Sebastian pulling at her legs. She lay still on her shoulders rolled up in a ball, her rear end pointing to the sky as her opponents released the hold. She slowly unfolded and came to a rest on her back, her eyes white and her chest slowly rising and falling as though she were asleep.

    The pair stood up and admired their handiwork as they basked in the boo's of the audience. Spencer soaked in the attention as she raised her foot and rested her spiked heel right above Reiko's left breast.

    "COUNT!!" She demanded as she rested her hands on her hips and dug her heel into the fallen challenger.

    "ONE!!!...."

    Reiko's fingers began to twitch.. she could feel the heel on her chest.

    "TWO!!!...."

    "m-... moth..-"

    "THR---"

    "MOTHER!!" Reiko bellowed as she miraculously managed to raise her shoulder and escape the pin. Her eyes were dull but there were definite signs of life in her. She wore a pained yet relieved expression as the crowd exploded for their underdog.

    "WHAT?! IMPOSSIBLE!!" Spencer cried out. "Sebastian! Get the Chair!!" she ordered her lackey. He was at a loss himself. He seemed to forget where he was for a second before he came to his senses and bolted outside of the ring and grabbed a folding steel chair.

    The dominatrix furiously grabbed the young Japanese woman's head and hauled her to her feet. She held her up with one hand by the hair and proceeded to slap her with the other across the face repeatedly as Sebastian made his way back into the ring. Spencer spun Reiko around and locked her arms behind her back.

    "TAKE HER OUT!!" She demanded. Sebastian lifted the chair high above his head, ready to strike.

    Reiko had other plans however.

    -WHUMP-

    "YAAHH!!"

    Reiko rose her heel right into Mistress Spencer's crotch as she freed herself from the hold and rolled out of the way of the oncoming chair. Spencer's eyes went wide as she doubled over and cupped her wounded womanhood. The chair was too far in motion to be stopped now.

    -CRACK!!!-

    "..a-....ah-.." was all that came out of the dom's mouth as she slowly fell spread eagle to her back. Sebastian was awestruck as he held the chair in front of him.. he couldn't believe that he had just nailed his master on the forehead with a steel chair.

    "Hey, Ronald!!" he heard Reiko call as he turned, ready to strike at his opponent. It was too late, however. Reiko was already airborn. She had her feet tucked to her chest and seemed to float for a second before exploding into a rocket dropkick, aimed straight for the chair.

    -CRACK!!-

    Reiko managed to kick the chair right into Sebastian's face. He fell to the floor gripping his face as he then proceeded to roll out of the ring, tail between his legs.

    Reiko got to a stand as the crowd roared for her. She turned her attention to the downed mistress and bolted over to the turnbuckle. She hopped up to the top turnbuckle and face outward towards the audience as she signaled to them.

    "This is it.."

    She jumped high into the air as the audience went silent.. She looked heavenly as her high flying abilities shone. She performed two backflips midair as she came plummeting down to earth, landing hard on her stomach on top of Mistress Spencer, whose eyes went blank from the impact. From there, Reiko immediately hooked her opponent's leg and went for the pin to win her the Rose of Roses championship.

    "ONE!!!

    TWO!!!!

    THR---"

    -click-

    The video paused.. frozen at the center of the screen was Reiko securing her victory over the fallen Mistress Spencer.

    "That bitch... Turn it off, Sebastian, you useless fool.." the dominatrix said gritting her teeth. Sebastian shut off the television, put down the remote, and walked over to Spencer to refill her emptied wine glass. Spencer was sitting in her private lounge watching the footage from last week's fight over and over. The whole thing had been burned into her brain. Stripped of her title and left with nothing but her desire to ruin the Zero Fighter.

    A ominous grin crept onto Mistress Spencer's face...


    --END PART ONE--
     
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  2. kirakuya1101

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    This is a good start and a great foreshadow of what's to come for poor Reiko. I hope she's ready to go through hell. If this is the first chapter, then I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Reiko. Keep up the good work.
     
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    Thank you!
     
  4. noche

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    Nice dude, a very promising beginning and i be waiting for the next chapter, but man i just love the title so much, sound very ominent
     
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    Lol thank you. Took a good minute to pick one. But yeah hopefully the next part will be out within the next few days.
     
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    Loved this. I love heroine victories. If their victories are this nasty, it basically promises that their defeat is gonna be even more brutal. Big victories are such a great way to build whatever brutality is coming next

    I also love the crowd pretending to cheer for Reiko. We all know deep down what they really want to see
     
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    Mistress Spencer is a spiteful one... we'll see what she has up her sleeve lol.
     
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    Love the story so far but I have a few questions to ask you.

    1. How many opponents are going to get their shot at Reiko?
    2. Is this going to be strictly Rumble Roses character that will destroy Reiko or will there be other male wrestlers involved?
    3. What kind of matches are you planning for Reiko? Is it going to be one-on-one or will there be handicap matches along the way?

    Just a few questions in mind. I'm curious because I see a lot of great potential for Reiko ryona in this story, which is one of my favorites.
     
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    Hey hey... spoilers, man. Lol
     
  10. Raden

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    This is fantastic stuff, ghost13. Unfortunately it seems you are too good right now and as such are intruding on my turf... I may need to write something myself now, lol.

    But seriously, very good stuff. I love it. Keep it up! And do try to work in a piledriver or three on Reiko ;)
     
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    So we gonna settle this with a dance off, right? Lol. And Ryonani could always use more Raden. Your stuff pushed me to write in the first place!

    And as far as piledrivers... well, you know my track record. ;)
     
  12. Raden

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    Wow, for real? I'm flattered, man, thank you. I'm glad it did, as your writing is high quality stuff that I enjoy reading.
     
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    The fiction forums here in general have been a big help lol. But youre a pretty heavy hitter in that department.
     
  14. Raden

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    This forum section was basically dead in the water until I came along, more or less. :b
     
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    Well there you go lol. But really, you have quite the arsenal of stories. My favorite of which is mist catchers... or hell for helena.
     
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    Don't forget to mention how humble you are ;)
     
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    ahaha, but it's true! :P
     
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    The minds behind mist catchers gather lol
     
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    *bonk*

    ...hollow sound...

    (okay, sorry, will stop spamming your story thread. Carry on!)
     
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    --PART TWO--

    "Ladies and gentlemen, welcome back to this week's airing of Rumble Roses and... Well, quite frankly, we are still reeling from what we witnessed before we went to commercial. For those just joining us, it seems that Aigle has shown a different side of herself. She turned on her partner, Dixie, and left her in what might as well have been a handicap match against Dr. Cutter and Sista A and they just picked her apart piece by --"

    The commentator was interrupted as the arena went dark.

    "What in the world??"

    The audience sat in confusion as they awaited an explanation for the sudden blackout. It wasn't long before they got their answer.

    An all too familiar song burst from the speakers as a dazzling array of lights and pyrotechnics illuminated the stage. The crowd booed when they realized what it was they were hearing. Suddenly a spotlight shone towards the entrance of the ramp, revealing just who was behind this interruption.

    Mistress Spencer. The light shined upon her as she sat upon her clown lackey and wrung a riding crop between her scheming hands. After a few moments of staring out to the crowd, she scoffed and slowly arose from her servant-throne. With one hand on her hip and a sly smirk on her face, she swung the crop backwards to strike Sebastian in the rear. He winced and stood to accompany her down the the ring and assist her between the ropes. She made her way to the center of the ring where Sebastian would hurriedly hand her a microphone.

    She held the microphone to her face to speak as the music died down, but the boos only grew louder. She simply smiled at the response she garnered.

    "It seems congratulations are in order." She began in a condescending tone. "One might consider last week's match a fluke, but... As I am no longer wearing MY belt, that appears to mean little to the powers that be."

    The audience jeered at her audacity as she smiled.

    "I digress... Reiko Hinomoto, if you would be so kind to join me here in the ring, I would like to have a word with you!" She rose her voice as she gestured towards the entrance ramp.

    Moments passed by slowly as Spencer became visibly impatient.

    Then the music hit. A driving, upbeat song stirred the crowd into a frenzy as they cheered for their champion. She burst from backstage, hands waving, as her radiant smile and enchanting charisma captivated her fans. But that wasn't all. She had changed her attire since last week. She wore a red and white top and miniskirt, accompanied by red and white chaps that rose to her thigh and sleeves that covered most of her arm, but more importantly, the gilded championship belt rested around her toned waist. She proudly sported her nation's colors as the Rose of Roses. The music died as Reiko looked out to the ring.

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    Mistress Spencer scoffed and rose the mic to her mouth. "Well, well, well... it didn't take very long for it to go to your head, now did it?"

    Reiko was not a shy girl, she had always been confident about her appearance and wasn't afraid to flaunt it.

    "I'm not the one standing in the ring in a white thong, Spencer." Reiko's nose crinkled as she playfully smiled and the audience exploded. The Dom was not amused.

    "AS I WAS SAYING..." She interrupted the raucous crowd, grimacing, "I would like to have a word with you, Reiko. Specifically, two words... " The Zero Fighter's eyebrow perked.

    "Rematch. Clause."

    The audience booed the dominatrix.

    "That's right, Reiko. I invoke the rematch clause. I challenge you to a fight and if I win, we have a rematch where I will regain what is rightfully mine!"

    Reiko was a champion right to her core. She would never back away from any challenge and she would never give up. She didn't even hesitate.

    "Ok, Spencer. You're on."

    Reiko dropped the mic as she made her way down to the ring, her once playful face now focused and ready. She weaved between the ropes and stood inches away from Spencer, eyeing her down as she removed the belt and held it high, not breaking eye contact. Spencer stared down her nose at the nineteen year old Japanese girl.

    Reiko set her belt on the corner of the mat where an official would take it, she then proceeded to her corner. Spencer slowly did the same.

    Electricity filled the air as the audience grew louder and louder, eager to watch their champion fight. Reiko stood ready, awaiting the bell.

    -DING DING DING-

    The fight was on, but Spencer immediately snaked her way between the ropes and headed to the ramp.

    Reiko had an confused expression on her face. She ran to the ropes and propped herself on them. "What the hell, Spencer?! I thought you wanted your rematch!" She yelled up the ramp.

    Spencer stopped halfway up the ramp and smiled menacingly. She signaled to Sebastian as he ran over to her, microphone in hand. She forcefully took it from her servant and locked eyes with Reiko.

    "I forgot to mention one small stipulation! My doctors have told me that I am not clear to fight after last week's match! So you won't be fighting me, but rather... My representative!!" She let out a wicked laugh as she extended her hand to the ramp entrance.

    Heavy music began to play... Music not heard before in Rumble Roses.

    "W-... Who is..?" Reiko muttered to herself.

    From the shadows behind the entrance emerged a gigantic cloaked figure. It slowly made its way toward Mistress Spencer as the Dom smiled, brimming with confidence.

    The figure reached Spencer halfway down the ramp. A gigantic hand emerged from the shroud and grabbed the cloak at the shoulder. The cloak was ripped off and thrown skyward revealing a monstrous, near inhumanly sized man. He had red hair and wore simple blue trunks, all extraneous in comparison to the imposing physique of this man.

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    Reiko's was awestruck as she broke into a light sweat. Her heart sank yet somehow was simultaneously beating out of her chest.

    Spencer merely smiled. "Allow me to introduce my representative for the night! ABBADON, THE THIRD HORSEMAN!!!!"

    With no time wasted he charged at the ring, every step resembling a piston furiously forcing the machine forward. He breached the ropes and slid into the squared circle, coming to a stand right next to Reiko. He seemed to dwarf the young woman as his beady eyes stared her down. Reiko clenched her fist. Her common sense told her to get out of there... But she was a proud champion...

    The mistress smiled as she rose the mic to her wry mouth.

    "Ding, ding, ding."

    --END PART TWO--