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3/12/13 Moocer's Dialogues *LINGERIE SHOP SALES GIRL*

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Moocher, Aug 8, 2012.

  1. Moocher

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    NEW: 3/12/13: Hey guys Ijust uploaded my Lingerie shop sales girl dialogue as requested by astounded, you'll find it under number 3 in complex dialogues. Please enjoy, and let me know if you encounter any problems.



    (OLD) 3/11/13: Hey guys, I have some fixed versions of my old dialogues thanks to Pim_gd. More will be up this week, and once again a big thanks to Pim_gd
    (Old)UPDATE: Recently it has come to my attention that I should be making some more complex dialogues, so I made a Role Playing dialogue you can find below, please enjoy, I'm very proud of it.
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    Hey guys, I decided I had enough Dialogues to just put under one post. So here I have both old and new dialogues of my creation hope that's all good. Thanks ;)


    Complex Dialogues:

    1) Princess Angelica: Here it is, my very first role playing dialogue. Now Chapter one is done and here for you to enjoy, chapter two will be on it's way soon I hope you enjoy

    Chapter 1: You're an adventurer who's discovered a strange island inhabited by only women. You and your crew learn that all the men are gone for half the year in search of resources. The"twist" is that this island has a special ritual that must take place between their Princess and the leader of the adventurers. This ritual involves the Princess sucking in the adventurer's penis until he cums all over her face. You get to be the lucky adventurer. Chapter 2 will be unlocked in two different ways. If you complete chapter 1 you will unlock either chapter 2a or 2b. If you fail, you must try again. There are two main paths to take in Chapter 1. LISTEN WELL TO WHAT THE PRINCESS SAYS TO DECIDE HOW THE STORY WILL GO!
    Good luck and remember feedback and karma is appreciated( :-\ even if it's bad)

    GAMEPLAY INFO: Start with her hands on lap and his free in normal position.

    THE DIALOGUE:[attachurl=31]
    V2:[attachurl=35]
    V3:[attachurl=35]
    V4:(Sorry for my stupidity)[attachurl=36]-THIS ONE(once again, I'm stupid)
    V5:[attachurl=37]
    THE CHARACTER CODE:[attachurl=32]

    SCREENSHOT:
     

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  2. evilmoers

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *PIZZA BOY and MAID update*

    I like 'em - quick, short, good.
     
  3. HentaiBob

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *PIZZA BOY and MAID update*

    Yap, me too!
    A few typos here and there and there was this one line...
    ... where I thought:
    Husband = [​IMG] ??
    ^^​

    The maid was a bit too slutty for my taste, but I liked the beach slut, the hooker and the pizza boy a lot.
    Thank you :)
     
  4. KurotoEregantona

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *PIZZA BOY and MAID update*

    Hahaha his husband GAY? epic!! xD
    +1 for you Hentaibob! Here's your reward:

    [​IMG]
     
  5. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *NAUGHTY NURSE update*

    Wow I just laughed so hard HentaiBob, and thanks KurotoEregantona for the hot chick. Oh and I added the Naughty Nurse hope you guys enjoy.
     
  6. Delev

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *NAUGHTY NURSE update*

    I like a lot of your dialogues, there's a decent amount of grammatical errors, but I do like what you're doing. Naughty Nurse is a great update. Good work ;)
     
  7. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HIGH SCHOOL WHORE(BEHIND THE BLEACHERS) UPDATE*

    Yeah I just uploaded a new one and I spell checked it so it should be fine, if I get the time I'll spell check the others too, thanks!
     
  8. AaRL

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HIGH SCHOOL WHORE(BEHIND THE BLEACHERS) UPDATE*

    I grabbed a few of these to see whats going on...

    Short and Sweet is the order of the day. Nice if your in a rush... but... if you ever want to expand your dialogues. You could try adding various moods and arm movements. They do add 'substance' to any dialogue. Not hard using the in game editor, but I suggest learning to type them out once you get use to it. Flash programs have a thing for crashing at the worst times...

    Also, you could add the character codes you've used, or suggest, for each dialogue. Also adding the backgrounds you used, or where to get them go along with adding even more flavor to any dialogue. Good writing!
     
  9. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HIGH SCHOOL WHORE(BEHIND THE BLEACHERS) UPDATE*

    Thanks for the feedback. I' can post the character codes no problem, and I've been trying to learn how to do some of the fancier stuff. Once again though thanks for the feedback it means a lot.
     
  10. AaRL

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HIGH SCHOOL WHORE(AFTER SCHOOL TUTORING) UPDATE*

    I'm sure you've seen this thread already: http://superdeepthroat.ryonani.com/index.php?topic=1640.0 but in case you haven't, you should check it out. It has become active again with more tips/tricks/workarounds from new and old alike dialoguers.
     
  11. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HIGH SCHOOL WHORE(AFTER SCHOOL TUTORING) UPDATE*

    Ok so I took your advice and gave complex dialogues a go, I think it went pretty well. THANKS A BUNCH. The help section really helped. I'd already read the main post but the comments were also helpful. Hope you enjoy my new RPDTG(Role play deep throat game)
     
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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HIGH SCHOOL WHORE(AFTER SCHOOL TUTORING) UPDATE*

    Yep, the Princess Job is quite nice. Still got many loopholes though, through which one can get out of the range of triggered lines.
    Some critic inside the spoiler.

    - any action can be done, as long as one keeps her mouth filled with cock. You might use some {"style":"Thought"} variations to lead to a proper ending
    - seems you can get away with raping her face as you want, as long as you don't cum in her mouth. So there should be some cum_on_face lines for other moods than Ahegao Mood, too

    With a bit more tuning I'm sure this will end as a really good dialogue :)
     
  13. zzaapp002

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *COMPLEX ROLE PLAY PRINCESS ANGELICA UPDATE*

    Good dialogues man... Thanks!

    But some of them are posted in two or three places. Could you put the version # on them? (Like the v4 Princess one). it would help with figuring out what the most updated ones are. Thanks!

    EDIT -
    Thanks for numbering them! I assume version Five is latest, right? (There is a non-numbered one at the top of your first post and also attached at the bottom of your first post. They are the same size so I assume they are both version Zero).
     
  14. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *COMPLEX ROLE PLAY PRINCESS ANGELICA UPDATE*

    I just wanted to tell you guys that Princess Angelica chapter 2 might take longer to appear, however I have posted the version numbers for everything. Though I will hopefully get another dialogue up soon.
     
  15. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HS WHORE-SEDUCING NEIGHBOR CHAPTER ONE UPDATE*

    Ok I added a new complex one with Holly, hope you guys enjoy it, I worked really f*cking hard on that thing. Feedback is always great, thanks guys.
     
  16. Delev

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HS WHORE-SEDUCING NEIGHBOR CHAPTER ONE UPDATE*

    I like the Holly dialogue. I think that Xiombarg's Background #123 - Entryway would go great with this dialogue.

    http://superdeepthroat.ryonani.com/index.php?topic=1184.0
     
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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HS WHORE-SEDUCING NEIGHBOR CHAPTER ONE UPDATE*

    In your newest dialogue there's a part where the guy says "you like how I stuff my throat down your face?" not sure if intentional but it doesn't sound like it is.
     
  18. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HS WHORE-SEDUCING NEIGHBOR CHAPTER ONE UPDATE*

    Wow, that's ridiculous I'll fix it when I update it, thanks for letting me know.
     
  19. Moocher

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HS WHORE-SEDUCING NEIGHBOR CHAPTER TWO BABY UPDATE*

    I updated chapter one and added chapter 2 of the neighbor seduction. Angelica chapter 2 is next. Let me know if there's any problems, thanks!
     
  20. Lizoran

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    Re: Moocher's Dialogues *HOLLY HS WHORE-SEDUCING NEIGHBOR CHAPTER TWO BABY UPDATE*

    It's good and i didn't see any grammatical errors(tough maybe there are some ::) )
    can't wait for the next one :)